Sunday, April 21, 2013

Crime Solvers



Starring: 
Detective Skittles the Unicorn
Detective Bob the Narwhal
and Criminal Bad Guy the Otter


It all started when Skittles and Bob were kids. They were watching a detective movie on how to solve crimes and eating some popcorn. The movie was great, but the popcorn was marvelous! They loved them both so much that when they grew up they became popcorn eating detectives.

Just the other day, Criminal Bad Guy stole popcorn from the movie theater that Detective Skittles and Detective Bob loved to go to. Skittles and Bob were so mad that they HAD to find out who did it. So they were off.

They found some footprints, and they looked like paws. They followed them and they led to a river. They were confused. Bob went in to try and find him. Meanwhile, Bad Guy was in his den hiding the popcorn.

After about an hour, Bob came back from the river with nothing. Just then, Detective Skittles spotted an old beaver's den. They ran toward it. When they got there, there was nothing but an empty popcorn bucket. They were too late.

Skittles floated home to his rainbow as the sky turned gray from his sadness. A few hours later Skittles came back down to the water for a drink when he saw Bob swimming up to him.

Bob said, "There's nothing to worry about. As long as we're still friends, everything is going to be alright."

"I guess your right," Skittles said. "All my life I never let a criminal get away, but I guess this time I have to."

"Come on Skittles, let's go get some popcorn."

And in the end, everyone had a happy ever after.

The End


This is dedicated to Ms. Jennie. Hope you enjoyed!


4 comments:

  1. hey hope you enjoyed the story this is dedicated to ms.jennie because she gave me the idea and if you have any more ideas on a story i should write please write a comment i will be checking them daily i love to rea youur ideas and comments so please write

    lydia

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    1. oh i forgot to say i will give you credit

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  2. Great story Lydia! You are a great writer! How about a story about a dog that has a flea circus on his back? Love you,
    Granny

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  3. and guys im in third grade now ill let you know every time i change a grade so dont get confused with the title


    lydia

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